for That Summer3/20/2004 c1 aaaaaaaaaaaaa
This is a really fun poem! As the aforning review said, great imagery. It seems very vibrant, and... lush, really. Nice. :)
This is a really fun poem! As the aforning review said, great imagery. It seems very vibrant, and... lush, really. Nice. :)
1/19/2004 c1 
7Green-Eyed Genie
Very descriptive imagery - it sounds like this summer meant a lot to you. I especially like the visual effect of no capitals and variable line length. Keep up the good work!
PS Thanx for your really nice review of my poem! Genie.
7Green-Eyed GenieVery descriptive imagery - it sounds like this summer meant a lot to you. I especially like the visual effect of no capitals and variable line length. Keep up the good work!
PS Thanx for your really nice review of my poem! Genie.