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6/27/2005 c1 5Mitsuko Maxwell
Oh that was lovely. The repeated four lines gave it a really good ending and smacked your message into the obvious.

Actually, I like all of your poems. They all have lovely rythms!
1/20/2004 c1 Jeanette
I dig your poem, dude. I think it's interesting that the third verse sales 'sails-men' and the sixth verse says 'salesmen. Groovy way to play with the words and the written language. two thumbs up!
1/19/2004 c1 keep.breathing
hey, that was awesome! very powerful. thank you for the review and, yes, my pen name is from the Radiohead song. they're one of my all time favorite bands too :) keep up the good work!
1/18/2004 c1 114Wren Craven
interesting analogy...i enjoyed the rhythm of it and it flowed well and the repitition of 'to rape, corrupt and take away' was really classy. thank you for reviewing some of my stuff, i really appreciate it. check out some of my new stuff if you get the chance
chloe

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