for Love1/17/2005 c1 
36obsidian katana
beautiful piece, and a nice metaphorical description of love. i like the imagery, especially the last line. nice job.
36obsidian katanabeautiful piece, and a nice metaphorical description of love. i like the imagery, especially the last line. nice job.
7/16/2004 c1 10Phaere
This is beautiful. And ever so accurate! This is just what being in love feels like. Anyway, what I feel like when I'm in love. Amazing.
10PhaereThis is beautiful. And ever so accurate! This is just what being in love feels like. Anyway, what I feel like when I'm in love. Amazing.
3/21/2004 c1 98hurtmushroom
Jop, das trifft's wirklich sehr gut! Super Haiku!
Werd mich mal wieder aufraffen und öfters hier vorbei schauen! ;D
Immer weiterschreiben, Stoffi!
cio, hoellenwauwau
98hurtmushroomJop, das trifft's wirklich sehr gut! Super Haiku!
Werd mich mal wieder aufraffen und öfters hier vorbei schauen! ;D
Immer weiterschreiben, Stoffi!
cio, hoellenwauwau
3/6/2004 c1 26kamikaze899
perfect description.. Ü
i especially loved the ending, and the irony.. falling, accompanied by something so perfect.. i'm feeling melancholy now.. wehehe.. amazing work! keep it up! ^_^
26kamikaze899perfect description.. Ü
i especially loved the ending, and the irony.. falling, accompanied by something so perfect.. i'm feeling melancholy now.. wehehe.. amazing work! keep it up! ^_^
1/23/2004 c1 53Lidless Eye
Awesome. Just awesome- You explained it in a very unique, extraordinary way. Brilliant job!
~Lidless Eye
53Lidless EyeAwesome. Just awesome- You explained it in a very unique, extraordinary way. Brilliant job!
~Lidless Eye
1/17/2004 c1 5loves him
I LOVE THIS HAIKU! I was wondering if I could use it for my website, I'd really appreciate it. Please e-mail me at with a reply. ^^
5loves himI LOVE THIS HAIKU! I was wondering if I could use it for my website, I'd really appreciate it. Please e-mail me at with a reply. ^^
1/17/2004 c1 168SeaVoi
Your line should be complete thoughts not run ons, but other than that its got a nice picture, very peacfull!
168SeaVoiYour line should be complete thoughts not run ons, but other than that its got a nice picture, very peacfull!
1/17/2004 c1 161chairmanmeow
Oh, wow. Lovely imagery. The last line was beautiful; probably because it completes the image wonderfully.
Ah, a feather floating down in the backdrop of the sky while the sun sets. Beautiful.
161chairmanmeowOh, wow. Lovely imagery. The last line was beautiful; probably because it completes the image wonderfully.
Ah, a feather floating down in the backdrop of the sky while the sun sets. Beautiful.
1/17/2004 c1 5Schlossherrin
Hi Kerstin!
ich finds Haiku sehr shön. hab dich übrigens zu meiner Favourite`s Athors -List hinzugefügt. Habe neue Sachen gepostet;-)
Also viele liebe Grüße, Sil
5SchlossherrinHi Kerstin!
ich finds Haiku sehr shön. hab dich übrigens zu meiner Favourite`s Athors -List hinzugefügt. Habe neue Sachen gepostet;-)
Also viele liebe Grüße, Sil