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2/15/2005 c1 suzieque2
It almost reminds me of my kids til that last line... my boy would just assume give his sister a shove instead... :-I
7/17/2004 c1 1Slightly Bent Halo
aw, it's nice to read a sweet poem about a brother and sister getting along... there's too much negativity in the world (and on this site), people need to learn to be more positive!
6/5/2004 c1 121Seeker of the Way
hey, lime-girl jsut showed this to me! This is really good here. It paints a nice scene/moment with a great emotional resonence. Nice rhyme and structure, too! Bravo!
5/15/2004 c1 24katmonkey
This is so sweet. My brother and I don't always get on together but when we do it's great.
Awesome poem - it's going on my favorites!
*lime-girl*
1/26/2004 c1 13Hermefonia
That is so cool.. I'm sorry but in my opinion it reminds me of Harry Potter and Hermione Granger...:D
1/19/2004 c1 32Birdaloo
aw! this is REALLY cute! it makes me miss my brother SO much! keep writing! i miss your stories! BRING THEM ON!:D smooch!
~Birdy
1/17/2004 c1 35Mime
The last line is sweet. I wish my bro and I got along better. ^_^
1/17/2004 c1 150SpawnMeister666
Okay, so it's corny.
But childhood is kind of corny anyway, when you sit back and look at how innocently they play certain games with each other, when in later life they'll argue over just about everything.
So, corny maybe.
But a damn fine piece of work none the less!
Spawny
P.S. Are you still mad at me hon?

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