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6/21/2006 c1 RedBerries
Sort out the formatting. There's something very wrong there.
6/7/2004 c1 LifeUnlived
Wow, very… mysterious to put it plainly. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
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5/8/2004 c1 16Dream and Write
Well done. Keep up the good storylines. I love the character interaction. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
http:/ucps.proboards30.com/
3/14/2004 c8 The Unbreakable
Once again, a great collection of one-liners and suspense. Keep it up!
2/17/2004 c5 52FAKEromances
"are we going to be heroes?"
Nice.
2/10/2004 c5 The Unbreakable
Have I mentioned how brilliantly written this is? Keep it up, I want to see if and how they catch this maniac. The dialogue is excellent- always a good line in there.
2/1/2004 c4 2Man of Legend
wow, this is so cool, i cant wait for more... hurry up already!
1/25/2004 c4 The Unbreakable
Short, but sweet. My only (very small) gripe about it is that sometimes the dialogue gets too confusing without noting who says what. But who am I to give critism. Keep at it- I want to know if Vincent and Fifty Two can co-exist, and if they do, what their plan is.
1/24/2004 c3 The Unbreakable
Simply awesome and funny dialogue. I laughed literally out loud at some of the parts, but then the seriousness of the story got me reading again. Very thrilling, although I certainly wouldn't trust a man who the CIA didn't even know. You got my interest- keep going with it.
1/23/2004 c1 Man of Legend
hey, thats really good, i will be waiting for the next part... if it is already out, please let me know!
1/20/2004 c1 The Unbreakable
They actually made a movie called "D.O.A." from 1950 that had a cop who was poisoned and he had 24 hours to live and he had to find out who did it. Although, I do like your plot better, the way that he has to team up with his enemy. Rather brilliant. Update soon- I am VERY curious to see how this story goes.

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