for Play of the Nymphs1/27/2004 c1 
8S.L.Beckman
ok, it was pretty good. However, you called it a "satire based on Roman mythology" and used Latin in it (for which I would commend you, except. . .) You used the Greek names for the gods (except apollo - he translates the same). If you want it to be Roman, use "Bacchus" and "Mercury" instead of "Dionysus" and "Hermes", and if you don't want to change the names, credit the Greeks, and edit out the Latin. Vale!
8S.L.Beckmanok, it was pretty good. However, you called it a "satire based on Roman mythology" and used Latin in it (for which I would commend you, except. . .) You used the Greek names for the gods (except apollo - he translates the same). If you want it to be Roman, use "Bacchus" and "Mercury" instead of "Dionysus" and "Hermes", and if you don't want to change the names, credit the Greeks, and edit out the Latin. Vale!
1/20/2004 c1 8glitterjewele
haha! okay, i LOVE the pet man. i can't get over him. every time he appeared i just started cracking up - such a fantastic humorous little character! :P i noticed that the dialogue seemed slightly awkward in a few places, but that probably just comes with the interesting (and very cool) idea of juxtaposing ancient times with modern ones. really like the concept of the play in general. nice work. :)
8glitterjewelehaha! okay, i LOVE the pet man. i can't get over him. every time he appeared i just started cracking up - such a fantastic humorous little character! :P i noticed that the dialogue seemed slightly awkward in a few places, but that probably just comes with the interesting (and very cool) idea of juxtaposing ancient times with modern ones. really like the concept of the play in general. nice work. :)