for Sodapop Bottle3/18/2008 c1 
17Coordinates Unknown
Wow. I was just browsing, and I found this, and...it's amazing. I love how it's written, and it's just so, well, I have no words.
Everything about it is perfect.
17Coordinates UnknownWow. I was just browsing, and I found this, and...it's amazing. I love how it's written, and it's just so, well, I have no words.
Everything about it is perfect.
1/20/2004 c1 natejames
This is an amazing piece. Very vivid and true-to-life. I can see that you don't beat around the bush like I tend to on some of my writings, yours is very open and easy to understand. Very well written and a captivating story that makes you ask a thousand "why?"s.
This is an amazing piece. Very vivid and true-to-life. I can see that you don't beat around the bush like I tend to on some of my writings, yours is very open and easy to understand. Very well written and a captivating story that makes you ask a thousand "why?"s.
1/18/2004 c1 5Procyon Lotor
Brilliant, mate. I happened to have been singing along to one song or another-one of those ones you can sing and not know it-and I completed the last line, and the words sorta fell from my mouth. Stopped them!
Very nice.
-Monty
5Procyon LotorBrilliant, mate. I happened to have been singing along to one song or another-one of those ones you can sing and not know it-and I completed the last line, and the words sorta fell from my mouth. Stopped them!
Very nice.
-Monty
1/18/2004 c1 34thegildedrose
Wow, this is truly amazing. The imagery really pulled me into the scene, and the soda bottle is both beautiful and ironic. This is definetly going on my favorite stories list.
Keep writing
~thegildedrose
34thegildedroseWow, this is truly amazing. The imagery really pulled me into the scene, and the soda bottle is both beautiful and ironic. This is definetly going on my favorite stories list.
Keep writing
~thegildedrose