for Golden5/9/2004 c1 Chris
Read this on TP, but I don't think I mentioned how much I liked it. Very nifty poem. Not pleasant for the persona, though. :-p
Read this on TP, but I don't think I mentioned how much I liked it. Very nifty poem. Not pleasant for the persona, though. :-p
2/4/2004 c1 
12All Mighty Terrestrial
Feels more like a beginning than an ending. I understand how this feels, I've certainly had my work criticized before. Thanks for the review!
12All Mighty TerrestrialFeels more like a beginning than an ending. I understand how this feels, I've certainly had my work criticized before. Thanks for the review!
1/18/2004 c1 34thegildedrose
I really like this: it's short, sweet and gets right to the point. Great job.
Keep Writing!
~thegildedrose
34thegildedroseI really like this: it's short, sweet and gets right to the point. Great job.
Keep Writing!
~thegildedrose