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4/27/2001 c1 Oltri
Freaky. Can't wait to see the rest. Write!
1/17/2001 c1 Ban
Excellent! Can't wait to read more!
1/6/2001 c1 Saber Tooth
Ooh... very creepy. There was one thing you may want to fix: it's "errands" not "errons", and the paragraphing. The paragraphing is annoying me! AIIIIII! But then again, this from the guy who wrote 100 Things That Piss Me Off... *goes to add 'paragraphing'* It was pretty good. Could've been better. After reading your summary, I said to myself, 'Whoah, I have got to read this!' It should have been expanded, and there were a lot of punctuation mistakes. But I really like this. I wouldn't take the time to review if I didn't.
12/31/2000 c1 Pitbull Girl
Hey that was good!
12/27/2000 c1 8Whoopdido
that was a great story and i cant wait to see the rest!

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