1/20/2004 c5 14peanutilover
Impossible dream indeed... yeah right! They're so meant for each other! Can't wait for the next chapter!

1/19/2004 c4 Spooni
Wee! How wonderful! What a genius idea!
The only thing I would comment on is your tenses. Having it in present tense is effective, but even more so if you *stay* in the present. You have a habit of slipping into the past when describing things...or just slipping into the past. It;s a little thing, but fixing it would make the story so much the better.
Kudos!
Spoonvonstup

1/19/2004 c3 Papillon Sierra
poor sander... *big hug* but i like orlah she's cool

1/19/2004 c1 Papillon Sierra
weird title... but i like... i'm still bored! hee hee hee *bangs into something* ow...