for The Lady in Red8/15/2005 c1 
5autobiography
wow. this is an amazing short(really short) story. what is truly amazing is that you are able to convey such emotion, passion, bloodlust, and love so concisely. And you leave the ending to the reader. I like to do that too. I guess you kind of picked up on that when you read my fic. So thank you for the review, and PLEASE, write more!
5autobiographywow. this is an amazing short(really short) story. what is truly amazing is that you are able to convey such emotion, passion, bloodlust, and love so concisely. And you leave the ending to the reader. I like to do that too. I guess you kind of picked up on that when you read my fic. So thank you for the review, and PLEASE, write more!
11/25/2004 c1 Moz
That was so well written - getting so much into so few words is no mean feat!Your vocabulary is excellent and the story gave rise to all sorts of emotions - fear, pity, curiosity, to name but a few. You should upload more stories!
That was so well written - getting so much into so few words is no mean feat!Your vocabulary is excellent and the story gave rise to all sorts of emotions - fear, pity, curiosity, to name but a few. You should upload more stories!
11/21/2004 c1 1tarienelle
lol.. i was gonna describe this story as "intriguing" but (a habit), i looked at the other reviews first and found.. 3? or was it 4? reviews with the word "intriguing" in it. so yea. x)
1tarienellelol.. i was gonna describe this story as "intriguing" but (a habit), i looked at the other reviews first and found.. 3? or was it 4? reviews with the word "intriguing" in it. so yea. x)
8/18/2004 c1 12Saharian
A little short but a very intruiging beginning none-the-less. You have to continue soon cause I really want to find out more. Good job :-( Now I am thinking about what is going to happen. You didn't give enough info, jeez. lol no jk. Beginnings like this are always the best because they really make you want more. Update soon and thanks for the review ^_^
Saharian
12SaharianA little short but a very intruiging beginning none-the-less. You have to continue soon cause I really want to find out more. Good job :-( Now I am thinking about what is going to happen. You didn't give enough info, jeez. lol no jk. Beginnings like this are always the best because they really make you want more. Update soon and thanks for the review ^_^
Saharian
7/26/2004 c1 44Stormer
Heya. This was a rather intriguing start. I assume it will continue? If it is a stand-alone thing then that is fine too. It works well that way ;) Very dramatic...a glimpse into a somewhat scary moment, but an interesting one too. You have a very wide vocabulary but I think you could experiment with it a bit - you don't always have to find a big and flowery word for something. Then again, the theme of this story seems to suit that style... Anyway, I won't ramble more, will just leave it at saying I enjoyed this and you should keep writing, most definitely!
44StormerHeya. This was a rather intriguing start. I assume it will continue? If it is a stand-alone thing then that is fine too. It works well that way ;) Very dramatic...a glimpse into a somewhat scary moment, but an interesting one too. You have a very wide vocabulary but I think you could experiment with it a bit - you don't always have to find a big and flowery word for something. Then again, the theme of this story seems to suit that style... Anyway, I won't ramble more, will just leave it at saying I enjoyed this and you should keep writing, most definitely!
7/10/2004 c1 6Lisa0211
hey, thanks for your review in 'the ripple affect' sequel we will take that into consideration. but sxy-princess and i did update chapter 13. now about your story...she likes being cut? is that a turn on? i hope you update this story soon cause i'm intrigued. ~Lisa~
6Lisa0211hey, thanks for your review in 'the ripple affect' sequel we will take that into consideration. but sxy-princess and i did update chapter 13. now about your story...she likes being cut? is that a turn on? i hope you update this story soon cause i'm intrigued. ~Lisa~
2/22/2004 c1 2Sylf
Whoa... this is intense...
Very, very descriptive. Your description is what definitely gives this piece its strength - the way you use different hues of red to get your point across, what an amazing idea. Red, a passionate, insane color - you use it to make your piece leap from the page, to show the colors of differing emotions - hatred, love, fear, hope, lust...
Wonderful, wonderful job. I hope to read some more of your work, soon. You have a very descriptive pen in your hands, my friend - use it well. :-)
2SylfWhoa... this is intense...
Very, very descriptive. Your description is what definitely gives this piece its strength - the way you use different hues of red to get your point across, what an amazing idea. Red, a passionate, insane color - you use it to make your piece leap from the page, to show the colors of differing emotions - hatred, love, fear, hope, lust...
Wonderful, wonderful job. I hope to read some more of your work, soon. You have a very descriptive pen in your hands, my friend - use it well. :-)