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2/12/2004 c1 1Paddyboo
Stop quoting songs for a start, it's a bad idea. Secondly, you're confusing imagery, but only a little bit ("Dripping into a puddle...But the smoke is in the aftermath). Keep up the good work.
1/21/2004 c1 2Et Tu Brute
ah, quite brilliant, the style brings about the feeling of nostalgia for a reason i cannot place... ah well, you write divinely

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