
3/12/2004 c1 MorganRay
It's a good idea, but you might want to give it a title. Also, PLEASE seperate paragraphs when a different person speaks! It'll make it less confusing (plus, that's how you write it)
It's a good idea, but you might want to give it a title. Also, PLEASE seperate paragraphs when a different person speaks! It'll make it less confusing (plus, that's how you write it)
3/2/2004 c1
4Blindfire40
This is a great story so far. i like the original way that lyn becomes a werewolf. keep up the good work!

This is a great story so far. i like the original way that lyn becomes a werewolf. keep up the good work!