
10/5/2005 c1
64not sure yet
i like the line a whileit was drifting out of the hole in your jeans, dont really know why, but it appealed to me, good flow to this one and a strong point, muchly enjoyable, nicely done

i like the line a whileit was drifting out of the hole in your jeans, dont really know why, but it appealed to me, good flow to this one and a strong point, muchly enjoyable, nicely done
9/30/2005 c1
33crispybea
a really thought provoking poem with alot of truth. we should really learn to appreciate the borrowed time we have left. keep writing. plz r me!

a really thought provoking poem with alot of truth. we should really learn to appreciate the borrowed time we have left. keep writing. plz r me!
2/6/2004 c1
32aconsciousjulia
WOWNESS, absolute wowness, im printing this one out and displaying it proudly in my room, its just so wonderfully good my dear katherine...
*jules*

WOWNESS, absolute wowness, im printing this one out and displaying it proudly in my room, its just so wonderfully good my dear katherine...
*jules*
2/4/2004 c1 Laksha
Somehow I feel like I know you...by the way, I love the randomness, you somehow manage to make it all fit together, very nice.
Somehow I feel like I know you...by the way, I love the randomness, you somehow manage to make it all fit together, very nice.