10/16/2005 c1 11Musical Tunes
oh i'm sorry! i send the wrong reivew to the wrong poem!

i think your poem is very nice by the way. Sinple and the rhyme is great!

4/20/2004 c1 141FELICIA-SPENCER
This is a totally different type of haiku, but I like it. I used to have this same problem when I was a kid, but now I sleep like a log. I like this. Great job.

1/28/2004 c1 8glitterjewele
very good! interesting format, i've never read this style of haiku before ~ t'was interesting. :) i think my favorite of the three was probably the last one, because it was the most original and also because you did such a GREAT job using sound: all the "s"s and "ft"s, it really felt like a cloud, to read it (however much sense that makes, lol). i have to say i also really liked the line "ear to hear?" in the first one, as well. and as for the synopsis question . . . i relate a lot to the second one, personally *ugh, stupid insomnia* i hope it doesn't keep pestering you! 'tis a miserable feeling. *sigh* anyway, nice work, i liked these! kudos! :)

1/22/2004 c1 100Keep it 100
These are some great 'cut' pieces.