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1/18/2005 c1 Patricia Dawson
very well done-sonnets are hard to do and you made it seem easy! I like!
6/12/2001 c1 Honesty
Powerful imagery - real impression of all hell breaking loose. You've got the form and meter right, btw, but you probably didn't need me to tell you that.
4/1/2001 c1 Hippie heron
Great metaphors! I can see the imagery and feel the emotion as I read it! And it is emotion that is easy to identify with. You are a very talented poet!
2/6/2001 c1 SharasKemet
wow! I am loving your touch of imagery. keep em coming!
1/19/2001 c1 32Chajiko
Woah, that was cool!
1/13/2001 c1 2BekaWashu
Cool! I don't reallt read sonnets, but this was really good.
1/1/2001 c1 21heart warden II
Wow . . . VERY powerful imagery, and extremely good diction! Generally, the word "fiery" is three syllables, but I guess you can always fudge it and count it as two . . . you might've known that anyway. Well, otherwise, a WONDERFUL sonnet, and I so love sonnets! Well, keep it up! Good!
12/23/2000 c1 5Jaimee
Whoa...that was HEAPS better than the sonnet I wrote in my English class (i'll give you a hint- mine was about feet). That was amazing and wicked cool. I got a really cool mental picture as I'm guessing so will everyone else reading it. Keep it up!

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