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1/29/2004 c1 21Bloodlilly
You asked for tips. I will tip. You've got quite a few basic grammar errors. I recomend getting a good beta reader. As for plot line, it's kind of hard to tell with only a paragraph, but you've obviously got something in mind. Don't stop just because it's hard. It's supposed to be hard.

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