for Unexpected Revenge1/12/2006 c22 
8Raven O'Connor
I knew Brant wouldn't sit down and wait for them to find her..lol.. Let's hope this David could provide a lead.
8Raven O'ConnorI knew Brant wouldn't sit down and wait for them to find her..lol.. Let's hope this David could provide a lead.
1/12/2006 c22 1Bish
Ooh! Cant wait for the good bits! Hm... i have a feeling its always the last one they check out... :)
1BishOoh! Cant wait for the good bits! Hm... i have a feeling its always the last one they check out... :)
1/10/2006 c21 7x.sweet.catastrophe.x
Ah I love this story! Please write the next chapter REAL soon! =)
7x.sweet.catastrophe.xAh I love this story! Please write the next chapter REAL soon! =)
1/10/2006 c21 ClaimingUntoughable
i'm clad u wrote another chapter quitly its so good i hope u can write more soon. i just love this story
i'm clad u wrote another chapter quitly its so good i hope u can write more soon. i just love this story
1/10/2006 c21 Dannie
Dang I hope Brant finds her fast! I hope she is ok though! I can't wait till your next update! I hope its soon!
Dang I hope Brant finds her fast! I hope she is ok though! I can't wait till your next update! I hope its soon!
1/10/2006 c21 8Raven O'Connor
Argh! They're impostors. I'm at the edge of my seat as I read this. Now, I can't wait to read the next chapter. lol.
8Raven O'ConnorArgh! They're impostors. I'm at the edge of my seat as I read this. Now, I can't wait to read the next chapter. lol.
1/5/2006 c20 1Bish
Ok, now i feel really stupid for thinking she was doing something other than having a bath...! :)And now its back to the action again! I'm loving it.
1BishOk, now i feel really stupid for thinking she was doing something other than having a bath...! :)And now its back to the action again! I'm loving it.
1/5/2006 c19 Bish
No! What is Libby trying to do! I hope Brant can save her in time!I liked the part about Julia, but Jake killing his own sister! He really is a bad guy! I'm glad he's not around anymore.
No! What is Libby trying to do! I hope Brant can save her in time!I liked the part about Julia, but Jake killing his own sister! He really is a bad guy! I'm glad he's not around anymore.
1/5/2006 c18 Bish
Things are going to be alright! Or at least thats how it seems in this chapter...i know you must be planning some plot twist soon! :)
Things are going to be alright! Or at least thats how it seems in this chapter...i know you must be planning some plot twist soon! :)
1/3/2006 c20 53BlueRose31
I have to say this is the best story i have ever read. I didn't want to review every chapter because i was so cought up in the story. I just continued to read untill I could go no further. Your story is simply amazing! I hope you write more and I think you're a wonderful write. The story and everything is fantasic! Hope you continue and such soon! Good luck! -Brandi
53BlueRose31I have to say this is the best story i have ever read. I didn't want to review every chapter because i was so cought up in the story. I just continued to read untill I could go no further. Your story is simply amazing! I hope you write more and I think you're a wonderful write. The story and everything is fantasic! Hope you continue and such soon! Good luck! -Brandi
1/2/2006 c20 wildchild853
yay! gosh, how does jake manage to always follow them aroiund? thats my new wonder. maybe theres an inside man. dum dum dum
yay! gosh, how does jake manage to always follow them aroiund? thats my new wonder. maybe theres an inside man. dum dum dum
1/2/2006 c20 ClaimingUntoughable
no dont finished this way. its so good ur story i hope u can writ more chapters really soon
no dont finished this way. its so good ur story i hope u can writ more chapters really soon
1/2/2006 c20 CircleStream
My review was refreshing and funny, huh? I take no offense to it at all, I just thought you would be MAD because my review sounded like I was some pyschologist-know-it-all...which isn't THAT true of course. ;)
Anyway...your story, yes. Another little cliffhanger, I see. I don't have much to say, really...so awesome work and update soon!
~~CircleStream
My review was refreshing and funny, huh? I take no offense to it at all, I just thought you would be MAD because my review sounded like I was some pyschologist-know-it-all...which isn't THAT true of course. ;)
Anyway...your story, yes. Another little cliffhanger, I see. I don't have much to say, really...so awesome work and update soon!
~~CircleStream
1/2/2006 c20 8Raven O'Connor
Haha.. I'm glad Brant just jumped to conclusions. I get the feeling this Anderson is just right in front of their noses.. And who was that following them at the end? I guess I'll find out soon enough.
8Raven O'ConnorHaha.. I'm glad Brant just jumped to conclusions. I get the feeling this Anderson is just right in front of their noses.. And who was that following them at the end? I guess I'll find out soon enough.