for Unexpected Revenge12/27/2005 c17 wildchild853
wow! you got that one up FAST! but good, great ending, gemmel is DA MAN!
wow! you got that one up FAST! but good, great ending, gemmel is DA MAN!
12/27/2005 c17 
1Bish
Poor Libby! I think its still very interesting, I want to know what really happened to Brant's brother, and who Anderson is...Keep going!
1BishPoor Libby! I think its still very interesting, I want to know what really happened to Brant's brother, and who Anderson is...Keep going!
12/27/2005 c16 wildchild99
i like your section with gemmel, it adds something new, not just brant and libby. great job! kekep it up
i like your section with gemmel, it adds something new, not just brant and libby. great job! kekep it up
12/27/2005 c16 25MacNWoody
taken awhile to get on, but the last few updates have been pretty good, and my bad on storey...need to check into those things before I say anything, lol
25MacNWoodytaken awhile to get on, but the last few updates have been pretty good, and my bad on storey...need to check into those things before I say anything, lol
12/27/2005 c16 8Raven O'Connor
Yay, another update. And I hope they'll take down Jake soon. I'm still wondering what had happened between Brant and Jake. I can't wait to read more!
8Raven O'ConnorYay, another update. And I hope they'll take down Jake soon. I'm still wondering what had happened between Brant and Jake. I can't wait to read more!
12/22/2005 c15 wildchild853
amazing! i LOVE the whole, libby hiding in herself. you are really building my curiosity about julia. good job and merry christmas!
amazing! i LOVE the whole, libby hiding in herself. you are really building my curiosity about julia. good job and merry christmas!
12/22/2005 c14 wildchild853
great! i love the thoughts that go through libby's mind. kkep it up
great! i love the thoughts that go through libby's mind. kkep it up
12/21/2005 c15 Raven O'Connor
Poor Libby. I wished that CIA agent would do something to help, but he's undercover..oh well..lolAs for the story genre, I'd thought it was odd to find it under mystery. Putting the story in Romance with action/adventure as the sub-genre is a good idea. That's just my opinion anyway. I've changed genres on one of my stories without problem. BTW, merry Christmas!
Poor Libby. I wished that CIA agent would do something to help, but he's undercover..oh well..lolAs for the story genre, I'd thought it was odd to find it under mystery. Putting the story in Romance with action/adventure as the sub-genre is a good idea. That's just my opinion anyway. I've changed genres on one of my stories without problem. BTW, merry Christmas!
12/21/2005 c15 1Bish
Oh, two chapters in a row!I hope Libby will be ok!
Cant wait to see what happens...
1BishOh, two chapters in a row!I hope Libby will be ok!
Cant wait to see what happens...
12/21/2005 c14 Bish
Who's Julia? I know you'll tell us eventually, but still... :)And ep! Scary stuff happening!
Who's Julia? I know you'll tell us eventually, but still... :)And ep! Scary stuff happening!
12/20/2005 c14 1Finnyh
A different turn indeed! this story, and everything about is fantastic/awesome/brilliant/ingenious!
I loved every second of reading this! especially the part in chapter 6 where this brant guy only has his towel on !lol :)! heh heh, anyway apart from that, I wouldn't say there was any other "best parts of the story" as it were...because it's all great!
I have nothing to complain about...even though I am running out of compliments. I loved every twist and turn and I was gripped to the edge of my seat just waiting eagerly to find out what was happening next.
Sorry this is another long review but I have so much to say.
Brill
Brill
Brill
Brill
Brill
for every chapter!
Yes, that was pointless, but I still can't get over how fantastic this story was! I can't wait for an update!
all the best ( get writing the 15th chapter!)
Nyviay x
P.S thanks for being so great! lol :)
1FinnyhA different turn indeed! this story, and everything about is fantastic/awesome/brilliant/ingenious!
I loved every second of reading this! especially the part in chapter 6 where this brant guy only has his towel on !lol :)! heh heh, anyway apart from that, I wouldn't say there was any other "best parts of the story" as it were...because it's all great!
I have nothing to complain about...even though I am running out of compliments. I loved every twist and turn and I was gripped to the edge of my seat just waiting eagerly to find out what was happening next.
Sorry this is another long review but I have so much to say.
Brill
Brill
Brill
Brill
Brill
for every chapter!
Yes, that was pointless, but I still can't get over how fantastic this story was! I can't wait for an update!
all the best ( get writing the 15th chapter!)
Nyviay x
P.S thanks for being so great! lol :)
12/20/2005 c5 Finnyh
I'll probbly give a final reveiew at the en of the story becuse I'm running out of thins to say! lol
anyway like evrything you have written so far,this is fantastic! I'm thouroughlynjoing reading this.
Hope you enjoyed reading my stories as much as I'm enjoying reading yours!
Nyviay
I'll probbly give a final reveiew at the en of the story becuse I'm running out of thins to say! lol
anyway like evrything you have written so far,this is fantastic! I'm thouroughlynjoing reading this.
Hope you enjoyed reading my stories as much as I'm enjoying reading yours!
Nyviay
12/20/2005 c4 Finnyh
wow, all is explained, well, almost all...
brilliant! one word to describe it all! 4 chapters done, just another10 to go! oh well, I'm enjoying it so far!
I might have to read the rest another time though because Ive got to go out somewhere but I can't wait to read the rest of it!
Brilliant again!
Nyviay x
wow, all is explained, well, almost all...
brilliant! one word to describe it all! 4 chapters done, just another10 to go! oh well, I'm enjoying it so far!
I might have to read the rest another time though because Ive got to go out somewhere but I can't wait to read the rest of it!
Brilliant again!
Nyviay x
12/20/2005 c3 Finnyh
A CLIFF HANGER! and a flipping good one too. aw.. I'm gripped. who is it eh?
This is awesome as always! Although...being young and innocent the whole bed thing was pretty awkward!
Nyviay
A CLIFF HANGER! and a flipping good one too. aw.. I'm gripped. who is it eh?
This is awesome as always! Although...being young and innocent the whole bed thing was pretty awkward!
Nyviay