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2/15/2004 c1 Fluffy Stalker
*tear* that was really good! I love the way you write. ^_^
~*Suze*~
1/29/2004 c1 30Roadside Dryer
Wow, that's awesome! The lyrics of that song were awesome too! Great job! Update soon!
I have a new story, A liFe in Hell's Kitchen, a crime story, sorta, you might like it, feel free to check it out!
Update soon! Great job, i loved the detail!
1/25/2004 c1 34Iris Devine
Wow, that was good. It was very poignant. Brava!
1/24/2004 c1 Rionarayne
Sorry I didn't get a longer review in before. After having time to listen to the song and apply the lyrics to the mental images I had, the story makes a lot more sense to me. I love the "he had her spiritual being" part. It shows both his and her complete devotion to each other. The ending may be sad to some, but to me it offers a lot of hope and even a little wisdom, if that's even possible. Extraordinary.
Rionarayne
1/21/2004 c1 28Rionarayne
Wow... at first, I didn't quite know what to make of it, but after re-reading, I really like it. I think that the way that the story is written, the prose, matches perfectly with the lyrics. I love Laura's feeling of hopelessness in the end; it really adds to the drama. Nicely done.
Rionarayne

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