for Living My Way4/20/2004 c1 
1darkflames
hey thanks again for the review this story really struck me as a very good piece on almost all of my belifs so keep writing more of that aptitude
1darkflameshey thanks again for the review this story really struck me as a very good piece on almost all of my belifs so keep writing more of that aptitude
2/1/2004 c1 WhiteFlameAngel
hm...this one sounds like a future best seller to me. Keep going.
W.F.
hm...this one sounds like a future best seller to me. Keep going.
W.F.
1/23/2004 c1 What about all the porn
nice one
nice one
1/22/2004 c1 3yesdnil
good story. Are you going to continue it? Your good at diolouge... maybe you could write a script or something too. I hope thats not all of it. You should continue it and elaborate on characters and stuff. If you want you can ask me questions on a specific part of it and Ill tell you what I think. I know that sometimes short reviews arent enough.
3yesdnilgood story. Are you going to continue it? Your good at diolouge... maybe you could write a script or something too. I hope thats not all of it. You should continue it and elaborate on characters and stuff. If you want you can ask me questions on a specific part of it and Ill tell you what I think. I know that sometimes short reviews arent enough.