for From the Cradle to the Grave7/12/2012 c21 
1MelyMelaluna
I think you have driven me to INSANITY with this story! I literally read Chapter One to Twenty One as of today! I totally LOVE how you make each character so different and memorable! Thats something I need to work on with my story . Let me just say, Chris is going to haunt my dreams if he's as sexy as you described him. I'm to the point that if I ever see a guy on the street that looks like him, I don't care how old he is! I am going to punce on him and kiss him XD Anyways.../ Keep writing! You're amazing! I hope to see a book by you on the market someday
1MelyMelalunaI think you have driven me to INSANITY with this story! I literally read Chapter One to Twenty One as of today! I totally LOVE how you make each character so different and memorable! Thats something I need to work on with my story . Let me just say, Chris is going to haunt my dreams if he's as sexy as you described him. I'm to the point that if I ever see a guy on the street that looks like him, I don't care how old he is! I am going to punce on him and kiss him XD Anyways.../ Keep writing! You're amazing! I hope to see a book by you on the market someday
7/11/2012 c21 rugvbkh799
I'm in serious like with this story, and do not believe I can see myself parted from it. Guess I'm a sucker for romances after all... I'm a hopeless case.
Something I'm hoping upon though (pun intended) is that you're going to update this soon enough, so that I can see how this story ends. I wasn't here the first time around, so I've got no idea how many more chapters I can await, but something tells me... at least ten more?
Cheers.
I'm in serious like with this story, and do not believe I can see myself parted from it. Guess I'm a sucker for romances after all... I'm a hopeless case.
Something I'm hoping upon though (pun intended) is that you're going to update this soon enough, so that I can see how this story ends. I wasn't here the first time around, so I've got no idea how many more chapters I can await, but something tells me... at least ten more?
Cheers.
7/10/2012 c21 1moonliteroses394
This was great. Totally didn't get any homework done but I mean, fictionpress right ? Can't wait for you to update ! I love all these angsty emotions just swirling around. Trent and Chris should dual is out in the next couple chapters.
1moonliteroses394This was great. Totally didn't get any homework done but I mean, fictionpress right ? Can't wait for you to update ! I love all these angsty emotions just swirling around. Trent and Chris should dual is out in the next couple chapters.
7/10/2012 c1 ooolala
A babysitter-babysitee romance? Definitely unique:) Loving the setup so far:)
One critique:
The old show not tell could make your story stronger. In some places, such as, "feeling nothing but complete and utter adoration for her favorite babysitter and playmate" and "it had been quite a fun-filled night", instead of writing how they feel, let the character's emotions shine through from their actions.
Thank you for the awesome story!
A babysitter-babysitee romance? Definitely unique:) Loving the setup so far:)
One critique:
The old show not tell could make your story stronger. In some places, such as, "feeling nothing but complete and utter adoration for her favorite babysitter and playmate" and "it had been quite a fun-filled night", instead of writing how they feel, let the character's emotions shine through from their actions.
Thank you for the awesome story!
7/6/2012 c16 19toffeecakesxox
for the record, this was the ultimate bawlfest right here. RIGHT HERE.
omg i cried so hard and then i went to sleep and i woke up and my dad was literally like, "were you crying last night?" LOL. i couldn't say that i was crying because of fictional characters so i just said, "uh it was a bad dream" LOLOL. i'm such a dork.
but yeah, just thought you should know.
Mere gets herself into the most ridiculous situations. i love her.
19toffeecakesxoxfor the record, this was the ultimate bawlfest right here. RIGHT HERE.
omg i cried so hard and then i went to sleep and i woke up and my dad was literally like, "were you crying last night?" LOL. i couldn't say that i was crying because of fictional characters so i just said, "uh it was a bad dream" LOLOL. i'm such a dork.
but yeah, just thought you should know.
Mere gets herself into the most ridiculous situations. i love her.
7/6/2012 c21 toffeecakesxox
omfg. i caught up in like, 3 days and i literally could not sleep until i got 5 chapters out of the way every time. :P
i'm so invested in these characters it's not even funny. and i love them all. except Evelyn. HATED her so much i almost punched something.
but that's beside the point. you have a masterpiece on your hands here. it played out in my head like a movie and omg i was so ready to get out of the house and like, WATCH this for myself. but alas, you're not finished yet so all the movie goers would be disappointed.
take all the time you need though! this story wouldn't be the same if you didn't put so much effort into making sure their emotions were just right.
i cried too. several times. and i like Trent and everything - i mean, if Mere doesn't want him, i'll gladly take him albeit as long as he comes with less work hours ;) - but CHRIS FREAKING SHUMWAY IS FLAWLESS. well, obviously not flawless (I LOVE THAT YOUR CHARACTERS HAVE FLAWS BY THE WAY) but i'm rooting for a Shummy and Cabes endgame here. (:
oh and the Shummy and Cabes part somewhere in the middle? like, before he moved out of the Cable house? OMFG I CRIED SO HARD I LAUGHED AT MYSELF.
and then the Calculus tutoring part i was literally praising the heavens at Momma Cable's slash your genius.
OH! and i miss Mere's parents. they were just too cute. plus Mike. i miss Mike too. :P
but seriously, i feel like these people are my friends and i just really really really want them to be happy.
SO MAKE 'EM HAPPY.
omfg. i caught up in like, 3 days and i literally could not sleep until i got 5 chapters out of the way every time. :P
i'm so invested in these characters it's not even funny. and i love them all. except Evelyn. HATED her so much i almost punched something.
but that's beside the point. you have a masterpiece on your hands here. it played out in my head like a movie and omg i was so ready to get out of the house and like, WATCH this for myself. but alas, you're not finished yet so all the movie goers would be disappointed.
take all the time you need though! this story wouldn't be the same if you didn't put so much effort into making sure their emotions were just right.
i cried too. several times. and i like Trent and everything - i mean, if Mere doesn't want him, i'll gladly take him albeit as long as he comes with less work hours ;) - but CHRIS FREAKING SHUMWAY IS FLAWLESS. well, obviously not flawless (I LOVE THAT YOUR CHARACTERS HAVE FLAWS BY THE WAY) but i'm rooting for a Shummy and Cabes endgame here. (:
oh and the Shummy and Cabes part somewhere in the middle? like, before he moved out of the Cable house? OMFG I CRIED SO HARD I LAUGHED AT MYSELF.
and then the Calculus tutoring part i was literally praising the heavens at Momma Cable's slash your genius.
OH! and i miss Mere's parents. they were just too cute. plus Mike. i miss Mike too. :P
but seriously, i feel like these people are my friends and i just really really really want them to be happy.
SO MAKE 'EM HAPPY.
7/6/2012 c19 2WolfynWynter
I'm sorry, but I am really rooting for Trent at this point. :( Poor baby; he deserves Meredith's love more than Chris, imho.
2WolfynWynterI'm sorry, but I am really rooting for Trent at this point. :( Poor baby; he deserves Meredith's love more than Chris, imho.
7/6/2012 c17 jorie
I'm liking Trent more and more.. Too bad though, I know he's gonna get his heart broken.. :(
I'm liking Trent more and more.. Too bad though, I know he's gonna get his heart broken.. :(
7/5/2012 c13 jorie
wow.. i totally did not expect that at the end.. i had to go back a few paragraphs and read again after seeing the word "Trent"
I literally paused and said "What?"
this is really good!
wow.. i totally did not expect that at the end.. i had to go back a few paragraphs and read again after seeing the word "Trent"
I literally paused and said "What?"
this is really good!
7/5/2012 c21 2Melody-lightful
Omg, I've just read this story in one sitting, AND HOT DAYUM, IS THIS AMAZING. I am so emotionally invested in this story, it's unreal. I almost died during Chapter 13 and 16. WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME? This is such an emotional rollercoaster and I'm hooked! Please update. I'm having withdrawl symptoms already :(
2Melody-lightfulOmg, I've just read this story in one sitting, AND HOT DAYUM, IS THIS AMAZING. I am so emotionally invested in this story, it's unreal. I almost died during Chapter 13 and 16. WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME? This is such an emotional rollercoaster and I'm hooked! Please update. I'm having withdrawl symptoms already :(
7/4/2012 c21 cosmopolitan
I actually just discovered this story and am absolutely in love with it! thank you for writing and sharing
I actually just discovered this story and am absolutely in love with it! thank you for writing and sharing
6/28/2012 c9 Guest
love it reallly !D
love it reallly !D