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1/25/2004 c4 Lily Pierce
Oh no! :( Poor Kenna! Isn't there any way for her to break the control that the Queen of Darkness has over her? *sigh* I hope there will be... I can't wait to read chapter 5!
1/24/2004 c3 1Bardic Melody
Go Laurana! "I didn't turn you into a frog." Yes! That's cute. Keep going. I want more. And I hope that she finds her brother. (If she doesn't I may have to cry)
Melody Out!
1/24/2004 c3 Lily Pierce
That was really cute! ^_^ I like Kenna a lot. I can't wait to see if Laurana will find her brother... I hope you post the next chapter soon!
1/23/2004 c2 9Stroke
Sup? This is pretty good. It's a little rough around the edges stylistically, but that will come with practice. This seems to have a strong beginning. I hope it will stay that way.
Until our paths under the pen converge another time I remain
Diviner
1/23/2004 c2 Hope's Daughter
Sorry guys, my review below should read Keep it up reviewers! Thanks guys!
1/23/2004 c1 Lily Pierce
It's really interesting so far! I'd like to see what happens next..
1/23/2004 c2 2Hope's Daughter
Lol, Christiana's soo lazy. Its no fun getting up... even to quest. Keep it up!
1/22/2004 c1 1Bardic Melody
This is good. I really like it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
1/22/2004 c1 13Mageling
This is good. I like it. A couple of things though: when they are speaking Elvish, could you possibly do something to mark it as something special, so that we know that they aren't speaking something that everyone understands?
Also, Christiana sounds kind of... stuffy and stiff. Is she supposed to be that way?
-Mageling :)
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