2/8/2004 c1 31krystalpendragon
i feel for ya. sometimes i wonder about my self...but just keep your friends ^_^
later
i feel for ya. sometimes i wonder about my self...but just keep your friends ^_^
later
1/22/2004 c1 90The Zaniak
Well...I liked the first stanza, because it had a really good rhyming structure, but I think that it went downhill from there. Because there was NO rhyme, and I have a problem with non-rhyming poetry.
Well...I liked the first stanza, because it had a really good rhyming structure, but I think that it went downhill from there. Because there was NO rhyme, and I have a problem with non-rhyming poetry.
1/22/2004 c1 10Crelian2202
Very nicely writen. I would delete 'and' where it starts lines, but that is an opinon (one that I suggest you think about, even if it is just reading a few lines without the and).
Very nicely writen. I would delete 'and' where it starts lines, but that is an opinon (one that I suggest you think about, even if it is just reading a few lines without the and).