8/15/2005 c1 65Nemonus
Pretty awesome. The rhythm carries the fun-to-see images, and the meaning is...well, mostly there. To fight fear makes sense, but to pity it-or he, but maybe in that you personified to much-and then the part 'your courage did him in', like he/it is defeated, were a bit, erm, lacking sense. But great lines/subject matter.
Pretty awesome. The rhythm carries the fun-to-see images, and the meaning is...well, mostly there. To fight fear makes sense, but to pity it-or he, but maybe in that you personified to much-and then the part 'your courage did him in', like he/it is defeated, were a bit, erm, lacking sense. But great lines/subject matter.
6/12/2005 c1 2Stonewall2
Great Poem. I really like this poem because it brings home to me the 'duel' that we go through with fear. You have a real talent with poems. Keep it up.
Great Poem. I really like this poem because it brings home to me the 'duel' that we go through with fear. You have a real talent with poems. Keep it up.