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7/30/2004 c1 Jacquelyn
Great prose. "a dance as old as time". you do wonderful works Koeryn, keep going with it :) ttyl
2/1/2004 c1 8htmraw
*smiles* cool... definately.
1/31/2004 c1 12Aurora Elvenstar
Great poem. I'm a dreamer myself and I think that your poem is really cool. I really liked the descriptions.
1/30/2004 c1 3Valkien
Nice man. Good spin on an old cliche. One typo but still good.
1/25/2004 c1 DanAdamKOF
Finally, a piece of poetry written by someone under 18 that isn't whiny and depressing and utterly sucking. This author has great potential, he's very good, and this story is no expection. Work a little bit on rythm and it'll be perfect.
1/24/2004 c1 2nightdragon0
Very nice, the last bit especially!
1/23/2004 c1 Shadow
One of your best, I must say T'klesh. Keep it up and do more. I easily get bored, you see, but then you should know that. My point is that this is a nice form of entertainment...and to not poke me.
1/23/2004 c1 75Amora Elvenstar
This is completely awesome. It's really neat how you made it sound so real, yet at the same time you made it rhyme. A great feat. I look foward to some of your other works if therey're anything like this one.

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