for I Deserve It4/6/2005 c1 
157darkmistresslae
This is a good poem. I like the series of haikus, it adds to it I think. There's lots of emotion put into it as well, which is always good. Nice work.
157darkmistresslaeThis is a good poem. I like the series of haikus, it adds to it I think. There's lots of emotion put into it as well, which is always good. Nice work.
2/12/2005 c1 Out-Of-Reality
Unique idea putting haikus together like that. It was defenitely sad and really well written. Brilliance yet again!
Unique idea putting haikus together like that. It was defenitely sad and really well written. Brilliance yet again!
1/23/2004 c1 19Poptart Faerie
I feel like I can relate to this poem, having self-hatred issues myself. It's painful, I know, feeling like you deserve the pain. I loved this poem. I think it touched the issue of self mutilation due to self hatred very well.
19Poptart FaerieI feel like I can relate to this poem, having self-hatred issues myself. It's painful, I know, feeling like you deserve the pain. I loved this poem. I think it touched the issue of self mutilation due to self hatred very well.