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3/1/2007 c1 97rust phoenix
Nice alliteration, you have a great way of describing things.
5/16/2004 c1 A Beautiful Nightmare
You're very good at using these type of words... well done...
4/20/2004 c1 1Lauren K
ooh yay yay yay, I LOVE alliteration! Very pretty...I even wrote haikus with it, and I love the flow of this. "seeking sublime seduction" good.
~Kiara
2/2/2004 c1 17thosewhomustbecarried
Very good! Quite impressive. I can imagine this took a little more effort than most poetry would ^_^ it's tough to make sense with such constraints. Keep it up. Cheers.
1/23/2004 c1 19Poptart Faerie
Very creative. I loved the alliteration(*hopes that's the right literary term*). I found it very sensual, I could really feel the silk and the passion.

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