for Take a Hint12/8/2007 c11 
15Isay
Cuz! I'm becoming active in storywriting again. :) I ended up checking out my friends' lit pages too, and read this story of yours for the first time. It's wonderful! I do hope you'd finish it someday. It's nice to reminisce about Pisay every now and then.
15IsayCuz! I'm becoming active in storywriting again. :) I ended up checking out my friends' lit pages too, and read this story of yours for the first time. It's wonderful! I do hope you'd finish it someday. It's nice to reminisce about Pisay every now and then.
6/3/2005 c4 Angela
I knew it! You're a filipino. Agham is Science in tagalog and mis keykai it's from kikay right. After noticing those I checked your profile. You went to ADMU, which is interesting because my highschool is MC. Well, I like the story so far but it was a bit confusing at first. You should use more imagery, it's mostly dialogue.
I knew it! You're a filipino. Agham is Science in tagalog and mis keykai it's from kikay right. After noticing those I checked your profile. You went to ADMU, which is interesting because my highschool is MC. Well, I like the story so far but it was a bit confusing at first. You should use more imagery, it's mostly dialogue.
9/9/2004 c3 11Jusy
*Aherm*
Yes... Molly would be Mimi... I have no idea how I made such a mistake... thanks, anyway... :P
11Jusy*Aherm*
Yes... Molly would be Mimi... I have no idea how I made such a mistake... thanks, anyway... :P
9/9/2004 c3 kate
who's molly?
who's molly?
8/26/2004 c13 3catalina58264
hey! update!update!update!update! wala lang... i tried searching for yoour pen name, but i didn't find you. good thing your story title was unique.
any way... please update... any questions about the skul, ask me. (i'm kate, if you don't notice yet.)
ngapala, ganda na ng grandstand...hehe
have fun! God bless!
3catalina58264hey! update!update!update!update! wala lang... i tried searching for yoour pen name, but i didn't find you. good thing your story title was unique.
any way... please update... any questions about the skul, ask me. (i'm kate, if you don't notice yet.)
ngapala, ganda na ng grandstand...hehe
have fun! God bless!
7/1/2004 c13 66lebuffle
Purty cool! Can't wait 'tll next update! Cracking story!
Forgive me, but in regard of the 'jeepney strike' you mentioned in your A/N, what exactly does a 'jeepney' look like? I'm intrigued!
66lebufflePurty cool! Can't wait 'tll next update! Cracking story!
Forgive me, but in regard of the 'jeepney strike' you mentioned in your A/N, what exactly does a 'jeepney' look like? I'm intrigued!
7/1/2004 c11 lebuffle
Hey - I'm back! Haven't been reviewing in a while - you've done loads. Thankies! Yeh, great stuff! I'm hooked, as usual!
Hey - I'm back! Haven't been reviewing in a while - you've done loads. Thankies! Yeh, great stuff! I'm hooked, as usual!
4/14/2004 c13 2aqua-amethyst
Thanks for the recognition! Your story is becoming quite exciting. I did not expect you'd put that in. Miss you Kuya! ;)
2aqua-amethystThanks for the recognition! Your story is becoming quite exciting. I did not expect you'd put that in. Miss you Kuya! ;)
3/11/2004 c12 Eleni
ooh... flashbacks... i love those to pieces! great chapter! *applause* update soon!
ooh... flashbacks... i love those to pieces! great chapter! *applause* update soon!
3/10/2004 c12 kate evangelista
dalian mo ang pagsulat nito, ganda ng kwento e... yung pinakita mo sa akin dati, yund tungkol sa mga nagpi-PDA at bading, astig! wala lang, naalala ko kasi e.
anyway, talagang nk-base ang kwento mo sa pisay... suggestion ko mag-include ka ng something about the observatory... masaya yun!
hehe, astig k pala magsulat... god bless!
dalian mo ang pagsulat nito, ganda ng kwento e... yung pinakita mo sa akin dati, yund tungkol sa mga nagpi-PDA at bading, astig! wala lang, naalala ko kasi e.
anyway, talagang nk-base ang kwento mo sa pisay... suggestion ko mag-include ka ng something about the observatory... masaya yun!
hehe, astig k pala magsulat... god bless!
3/5/2004 c11 Branchie
Wow, this is an excellent story! I certainly look forward to reading more in the future.. keep up the great work! ^-^
Wow, this is an excellent story! I certainly look forward to reading more in the future.. keep up the great work! ^-^
3/3/2004 c11 Moonesscent
Did HC stand for has a crush? And did that crush happen to be on Marie?
Marie+Charles= that's kinda okay
Marie+John= totally weird
Did HC stand for has a crush? And did that crush happen to be on Marie?
Marie+Charles= that's kinda okay
Marie+John= totally weird