
1/24/2004 c7
1Loup de Minuit
Good. Nice description. It does, however, get a tad confusing on the characters. I suggest you provide a little more info on them somewhere in there; like description or something. Give them a little more depth. But that's just my advise. Otherwise, it's great. Keep writing.

Good. Nice description. It does, however, get a tad confusing on the characters. I suggest you provide a little more info on them somewhere in there; like description or something. Give them a little more depth. But that's just my advise. Otherwise, it's great. Keep writing.