for My tenba2/12/2004 c1 
2Naoko Tabeuki
That's soo good! I could like picture a person a pegasus flying around! I'm not very good at poems. That's why i write stories! But that was soo awesome! I wish i could write poems!
2Naoko TabeukiThat's soo good! I could like picture a person a pegasus flying around! I'm not very good at poems. That's why i write stories! But that was soo awesome! I wish i could write poems!
2/6/2004 c1 LittleCreatureOfTheSnow
*blinks* Odd. . . but an okay idea!
*blinks* Odd. . . but an okay idea!
2/5/2004 c1 BadExample
i was too lazy to sign in so you won't one of those little links...i like it you're imagry is really cool...(a word of advise i saw that some one named h.o.w.i.e has reveiwed one of your poems, stay away from him. he's really nuts, so nuts he's read all 100+ of my stuff and revweied most of my stuff, which is scary but it's what he says that freaks me out(i think he's become obsesed) so just a friendly word of advise)
loki
i was too lazy to sign in so you won't one of those little links...i like it you're imagry is really cool...(a word of advise i saw that some one named h.o.w.i.e has reveiwed one of your poems, stay away from him. he's really nuts, so nuts he's read all 100+ of my stuff and revweied most of my stuff, which is scary but it's what he says that freaks me out(i think he's become obsesed) so just a friendly word of advise)
loki
1/28/2004 c1 220Namir Swiftpaw
Uqaq -
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I do think poems for humor are fine. However, it wasn't that well written of a poem. I can take the critique when someone tells me that they don't like a piece of my writing. I suggest you learn to do the same.
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Newsflash - I would try to be a little less rude next time. I was not rude to you at all. I don't think I am superior at all - you're making an unfair judgement of me, and you are also calling me a Nazi, which is something rather derogatory and demeaning. I might be German, but I am no Nazi, and I would appreciate it if you thought about things before just saying them.
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And next time you want to get in touch with me, don't leave it in a review. I would have emailed you, but your email was not listed on your page. Mine IS, however, for situations like this, and I am going to give it to you right here in case you want to pursue this further.
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I do care about what you think and I am sorry if I offended you, but some people take writing on this site a little more seriously than others, and I think everyone should learn to accept critique and not get so damn worked up about it.
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~Namir Swiftpaw
220Namir SwiftpawUqaq -
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I do think poems for humor are fine. However, it wasn't that well written of a poem. I can take the critique when someone tells me that they don't like a piece of my writing. I suggest you learn to do the same.
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Newsflash - I would try to be a little less rude next time. I was not rude to you at all. I don't think I am superior at all - you're making an unfair judgement of me, and you are also calling me a Nazi, which is something rather derogatory and demeaning. I might be German, but I am no Nazi, and I would appreciate it if you thought about things before just saying them.
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And next time you want to get in touch with me, don't leave it in a review. I would have emailed you, but your email was not listed on your page. Mine IS, however, for situations like this, and I am going to give it to you right here in case you want to pursue this further.
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I do care about what you think and I am sorry if I offended you, but some people take writing on this site a little more seriously than others, and I think everyone should learn to accept critique and not get so damn worked up about it.
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~Namir Swiftpaw
1/25/2004 c1 HideAwayFairy
I really love this poem. I've always loved pegasus(s) and I've always wanted wings to fly.Thanks for reveiwing my poem! Keep writing.
I really love this poem. I've always loved pegasus(s) and I've always wanted wings to fly.Thanks for reveiwing my poem! Keep writing.
1/24/2004 c1 16amethystdawn
Lovely story. I love it's poetic form. ^_^ I hope you'll do more of these things.
16amethystdawnLovely story. I love it's poetic form. ^_^ I hope you'll do more of these things.