for Pretty Lily7/25/2004 c1 
13Les Stranger
Dude! i really like your rhyming pattern in this piece! the ending's got quite an impact too! was kinda blown away at d end...lol...good one dude! *thumbs up* keep writing! ;)
13Les StrangerDude! i really like your rhyming pattern in this piece! the ending's got quite an impact too! was kinda blown away at d end...lol...good one dude! *thumbs up* keep writing! ;)
7/3/2004 c1 44tiger lily8
This was pretty twisted. I don't knwo why...it just felt that way. Very nice words though.
44tiger lily8This was pretty twisted. I don't knwo why...it just felt that way. Very nice words though.