for i wanna be cool9/27/2004 c3 00Anonymous00
Ouch...Ouch...Help! I'm...I..I can't breathe...(feels one of the seven voices inside her take ahold of her body)
Ah, pardon about that. Anyway, here's what the hyperventilating girl wanted to say.
"I'm laughing my ass off and can't breathe. I need someone to dial 911 but since no one's awake, I'll probably die laughing. Too much air will clog my lungs and choke me to death coz no oxygen will enter my body!"
Well, at least that's what she was thinking. The moron! But anyway, she'll be fine.
Do update. She'll read more of this soon enough.
Ouch...Ouch...Help! I'm...I..I can't breathe...(feels one of the seven voices inside her take ahold of her body)
Ah, pardon about that. Anyway, here's what the hyperventilating girl wanted to say.
"I'm laughing my ass off and can't breathe. I need someone to dial 911 but since no one's awake, I'll probably die laughing. Too much air will clog my lungs and choke me to death coz no oxygen will enter my body!"
Well, at least that's what she was thinking. The moron! But anyway, she'll be fine.
Do update. She'll read more of this soon enough.
7/16/2004 c3 
22Big City Target
Oh, wow. This story is hilarious. I do hope you haven't abandoned it, I want to know if she ever gets those 'punks' back! Ha, I'm actually laughing out loud. Good job.
22Big City TargetOh, wow. This story is hilarious. I do hope you haven't abandoned it, I want to know if she ever gets those 'punks' back! Ha, I'm actually laughing out loud. Good job.
1/30/2004 c2 Agathy
Nice story. It goes a little fast, but it's easy to understand and the main character is kind of funny. I loved the way you characterized her...she's so desperate (even willing to pay money! lol). Well, update soon.
Nice story. It goes a little fast, but it's easy to understand and the main character is kind of funny. I loved the way you characterized her...she's so desperate (even willing to pay money! lol). Well, update soon.
1/26/2004 c2 4writerofwords154
yet again. WHAT? sorry, but the story is moving way too fast! still no details i see. but oh well. plus, this random idea just popped outta the blue? what is happening? slow it down!
4writerofwords154yet again. WHAT? sorry, but the story is moving way too fast! still no details i see. but oh well. plus, this random idea just popped outta the blue? what is happening? slow it down!
1/26/2004 c1 writerofwords154
whoa, whoa, whoa. wut just happened? good storyline, but i was totally lost, everything moved so fast. where is this character? what does she look like? whats her name? more details!
whoa, whoa, whoa. wut just happened? good storyline, but i was totally lost, everything moved so fast. where is this character? what does she look like? whats her name? more details!
1/26/2004 c2 150SpawnMeister666
I don't know why but this is seriously growing on me! I look forward to the next installment!
Spawny
150SpawnMeister666I don't know why but this is seriously growing on me! I look forward to the next installment!
Spawny
1/25/2004 c2 1Oort
Keep up the story! And RTI! Uh... just look at my last review again, I have nothing new to say... or, don't look at my last review, because that wouldn't make sense... you get what I mean? Huh? Get back to those stories! Now! Because I tell you to. And so does almost everyone else, but not everyone else. There's this insane pokemon that says you stink. I don't know why. Keep writing!
1OortKeep up the story! And RTI! Uh... just look at my last review again, I have nothing new to say... or, don't look at my last review, because that wouldn't make sense... you get what I mean? Huh? Get back to those stories! Now! Because I tell you to. And so does almost everyone else, but not everyone else. There's this insane pokemon that says you stink. I don't know why. Keep writing!
1/25/2004 c1 Oort
Keep up the story! It could be good! And get back to RTI! (Return to Insanity) Also, what does "fag" and "dyke" mean? I want to be sure that I understood what they said, but I've nevere heard of "fags" before...
Keep up the story! It could be good! And get back to RTI! (Return to Insanity) Also, what does "fag" and "dyke" mean? I want to be sure that I understood what they said, but I've nevere heard of "fags" before...
1/25/2004 c1 writerofwords154
hey great story man. i was wondering why you said my Personal Ad idea was a bit taken. jw. good job.
hey great story man. i was wondering why you said my Personal Ad idea was a bit taken. jw. good job.
1/25/2004 c1 150SpawnMeister666
So are you really barred from singing at birthday parties?
That's gotta suck!
Spawny
150SpawnMeister666So are you really barred from singing at birthday parties?
That's gotta suck!
Spawny