for Watch and Wait1/25/2004 c1 
5UnholySchism
Wow. I liked all of this. Especially
I don't know these melodies,
And I can not hear your rhymes,
Destinations all unknown,
To this ancient clock of time.
It just struck something..I dunno. Little phrases often do that. I really liked it though, and if your new to actual songs, well you're off to a very good start :)
5UnholySchismWow. I liked all of this. Especially
I don't know these melodies,
And I can not hear your rhymes,
Destinations all unknown,
To this ancient clock of time.
It just struck something..I dunno. Little phrases often do that. I really liked it though, and if your new to actual songs, well you're off to a very good start :)
1/25/2004 c1 14arbysauce93
I really liked this poem. The last line keeps a lot to be questioned. The rythm isn't the easiest in the world to follow, but besides that a very nice poem. Keep up the good work!
14arbysauce93I really liked this poem. The last line keeps a lot to be questioned. The rythm isn't the easiest in the world to follow, but besides that a very nice poem. Keep up the good work!
1/25/2004 c1 4The Great Muses
Oh! You know ... i made up a melody in my head while i was reading this! It goes like this ... duh, dee, di di ... oops. ah, well, don't worry about it. But when it hits the pepsi charts, i'll be able to say, hey! I was the second person to review that and i'm damn proud of it!
Ahem
nope ... i love it! =D
4The Great MusesOh! You know ... i made up a melody in my head while i was reading this! It goes like this ... duh, dee, di di ... oops. ah, well, don't worry about it. But when it hits the pepsi charts, i'll be able to say, hey! I was the second person to review that and i'm damn proud of it!
Ahem
nope ... i love it! =D