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1/25/2004 c1 15lioness2004
I like you're righting style. If you could, can you review my story Return of the True King. Thanks. Keep up the good work.
P.S. realize is spelt with a z not s
1/25/2004 c1 pieces
It was interesting. I like the way it was more of a rant than a story - the fact that the narrator was honest in his/her own mind as opposed to the over-detailed sultry crap that a lot of people find (and I write *sheepish grin*). Good job. If you were aiming for a reader to catch onto exactly what you were saying, you might want to put a bit more ... erm ... direction into it. But if you weren't it's all gravy - this piece is great the way it is, and I don't reccomend changing it. Keep writing.
~Gabby

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