for A World of Our Own7/9/2005 c1 
59Unfairy
I LOVED the dive bit... Too bad QuickEdit doesn't let us do that anymore.
Also, one should always live in the present, never the past or future.
59UnfairyI LOVED the dive bit... Too bad QuickEdit doesn't let us do that anymore.
Also, one should always live in the present, never the past or future.
1/30/2004 c1 3Taka ichijouji
I want to let you know that this poem speaks to me. I have the same type of feelings when I write my fanfiction. I believe that I can hide in my mind and just be free from the worries of the real world. Great poem.
3Taka ichijoujiI want to let you know that this poem speaks to me. I have the same type of feelings when I write my fanfiction. I believe that I can hide in my mind and just be free from the worries of the real world. Great poem.
1/28/2004 c1 38Faeth
this one made me smile. i like how you wrote the word "dive" and basically this poem, very magical indeed! ^-^~*
38Faeththis one made me smile. i like how you wrote the word "dive" and basically this poem, very magical indeed! ^-^~*
1/25/2004 c1 9Jin C
I wasn't even planning to read a poem but then I happened upon yours. It's quite nice, and everything fits really well. And it has a hidden meaning; those all always good. Makes people think. I had to read through it several times to understand, or maybe I'm just naturally dense. ^^;; Well, see ya!
9Jin CI wasn't even planning to read a poem but then I happened upon yours. It's quite nice, and everything fits really well. And it has a hidden meaning; those all always good. Makes people think. I had to read through it several times to understand, or maybe I'm just naturally dense. ^^;; Well, see ya!
1/25/2004 c1 74LordK
Awesome! I LOVE THIS POEM! The final line is comepletely perfect. The flow is good, and everything you say is true. Nothing else to say really.
74LordKAwesome! I LOVE THIS POEM! The final line is comepletely perfect. The flow is good, and everything you say is true. Nothing else to say really.
1/25/2004 c1 45flowerthief
That's so awesome. I havent read anything else like it. I love the lines: "The past is never pretty,
And the future isn’t either."
That's genius. Good job.
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AC
45flowerthiefThat's so awesome. I havent read anything else like it. I love the lines: "The past is never pretty,
And the future isn’t either."
That's genius. Good job.
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AC