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12/1/2005 c1 28Most Immature
This is plain sweet and cute! I love this one... I like how you did 1232 style stanzas. :)
5/6/2004 c1 2Dumon
I really like this poem. it gives me the whimsical air of a child. I can picture a little girl saying this poem while she runs through a forest. A dense and green forest this fair haired child with a crown of wildflowers runs through barefoot. beautiful poem. thank-you for leaving me a review I hope that you'll read my other works. thank you again, lovely poem. nice rhyming!
4/22/2004 c1 194Aslan Israel
That was so cute! I really did like this!
4/20/2004 c1 141FELICIA-SPENCER
This was cute. I really like the rhymes. It was too cute. I guess I'll Goesy go. Great job.
3/29/2004 c1 107Lover-of-Heartbreak
Interesting, different...I like it...It was kinda funny but very good...kept my interest.
3/3/2004 c1 17Galaxy Girl
Aw, that was adorable! ^_^ The rhyme scheme was so playful and cute. Good job! ^_^
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1/27/2004 c1 8glitterjewele
hehe! this is so cute, and so sweet. especially loved the rosey rose. :P definitely made me smile, good work! :)

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