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1/27/2004 c1 9infernal x jade
haha nabila.. ur so sweet =P you know i dont rite as good as you yet..lol hopefully one day i will =)
1/27/2004 c1 3Nabila
A bit vengeful are we? ^_^
Just kidding...
Absolutely marvelous!
I read it and I think my jaw is bruised, it hit the floor so hard!
Really, I know you're a great writer, but that is...is...OUTSTANDING!
Keep it up!
As for the poem itself, I love the anguish. Makes me feel like someone was slapping me and ripping out my guts. VERY vivid. And the various similar/repetitive lines are exquisite. (^_^)
Love you always,
Nabila
1/25/2004 c1 51TragedyLovesMisery
I like poems that are filled with raw emotion. Good work.

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