for Day of Silence1/25/2004 c1 
84Escapist
OOh, very nice poem. I think I might just have to take a Day of Silence myself, since it seems as if this poem came right from my own mind.
84EscapistOOh, very nice poem. I think I might just have to take a Day of Silence myself, since it seems as if this poem came right from my own mind.
1/25/2004 c1 29Autumn tears
Hm, you've got a great idea behind this poem, but I think some of your word choices pulled it down a bit. I liked the simple, short rhyming style. But I don't think that the small simple words complimented the style and moral entirely. However, I still really really enjoyed it. Keep up the fight :D
29Autumn tearsHm, you've got a great idea behind this poem, but I think some of your word choices pulled it down a bit. I liked the simple, short rhyming style. But I don't think that the small simple words complimented the style and moral entirely. However, I still really really enjoyed it. Keep up the fight :D