8/24/2006 c1 55DepressionDevil
Now, where do I start? As a lot of people I can relate to this more than I'd like to. I truly like the way you sort your words, sometimes it seems you cut sentences in half - it makes them so good! Perhaps a bit of jealousy here, whenever I do it things don't turn out the way I'd like. I think that perhaps I should tell my special friend how amazing he is before he's gone too...truly, very nicely written. -Alyssa

1/31/2004 c1 196Damaged
What a beautiful poem, sad and sweet all at once! Excellent job! Keep it up!

1/25/2004 c1 70insert name here
;_; its so sad... very moving piece of work, its amazing how some people touch our lives, and how we realize it most when they're gone...