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9/8/2005 c1 4Illigitimate Luv Child
You're absolutely right, my flame was uncalled for and I would like to publicly apologise to you for it. You are a talented writer and I had no right to write that about your poem. On a happier note, this poem was beautiful, 'with wind to a charred sky' that line really grabbed me.

Deeply Apologetically,

Illigitimate Luv Child
5/19/2004 c1 Made in U.S.A
i love it! :D
4/26/2004 c1 11Helxine
Short and sweet. Nice choice of words.
4/12/2004 c1 147hiding behind amber eyes
this is great. i can't really say why i like it but i do and it's great.
3/20/2004 c1 10Seaspray
Great poem! I loved the bit about the ocean drowning the stars... very well written, well done!
2/28/2004 c1 72Magnificent Moi
Good descriptive writing. I don't feel as much emotion.
-Em
2/3/2004 c1 Lines To Time
So when are you going to get something published? Because, you know, you would be a best-seller within twenty minutes. Plus, I just finished my new book and now I need another.
1/31/2004 c1 26esotericblood
Awesome poem, you seem talented. I love the metaphors and the imagery of this poem. I'm also a big fan of Daniel Johns, hehe, if you care.

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