for My World9/8/2005 c1 
4Illigitimate Luv Child
You're absolutely right, my flame was uncalled for and I would like to publicly apologise to you for it. You are a talented writer and I had no right to write that about your poem. On a happier note, this poem was beautiful, 'with wind to a charred sky' that line really grabbed me.
Deeply Apologetically,
Illigitimate Luv Child
4Illigitimate Luv ChildYou're absolutely right, my flame was uncalled for and I would like to publicly apologise to you for it. You are a talented writer and I had no right to write that about your poem. On a happier note, this poem was beautiful, 'with wind to a charred sky' that line really grabbed me.
Deeply Apologetically,
Illigitimate Luv Child
4/12/2004 c1 147hiding behind amber eyes
this is great. i can't really say why i like it but i do and it's great.
147hiding behind amber eyesthis is great. i can't really say why i like it but i do and it's great.
3/20/2004 c1 10Seaspray
Great poem! I loved the bit about the ocean drowning the stars... very well written, well done!
10SeasprayGreat poem! I loved the bit about the ocean drowning the stars... very well written, well done!
2/3/2004 c1 Lines To Time
So when are you going to get something published? Because, you know, you would be a best-seller within twenty minutes. Plus, I just finished my new book and now I need another.
So when are you going to get something published? Because, you know, you would be a best-seller within twenty minutes. Plus, I just finished my new book and now I need another.
1/31/2004 c1 26esotericblood
Awesome poem, you seem talented. I love the metaphors and the imagery of this poem. I'm also a big fan of Daniel Johns, hehe, if you care.
26esotericbloodAwesome poem, you seem talented. I love the metaphors and the imagery of this poem. I'm also a big fan of Daniel Johns, hehe, if you care.