for Halogen Anger2/1/2004 c1 
81daphnegray78
Awesome poem. It has a really unique flow to it. I especially liked the lines:
"Plagued is a worn mind
And broken is my face"
Good job! :o)
81daphnegray78Awesome poem. It has a really unique flow to it. I especially liked the lines:
"Plagued is a worn mind
And broken is my face"
Good job! :o)
2/1/2004 c1 15Jyynx
Bloody rivetting, darling, a real thriller ;) lol, seriously, it is really good, i like the form of every last line rhyming with the last and the way all the stanzas start with "All this time". ;) Mad Props.
15JyynxBloody rivetting, darling, a real thriller ;) lol, seriously, it is really good, i like the form of every last line rhyming with the last and the way all the stanzas start with "All this time". ;) Mad Props.
1/28/2004 c1 22Non-existent Puritanism
Good poem. One little tidbit that seemed weird, was in the first stanza you had "caged within a torn body". And then "Plagued is.." and "broken is..." It seems weird that it wasn't "caged is...". But that's all, good poem.
22Non-existent PuritanismGood poem. One little tidbit that seemed weird, was in the first stanza you had "caged within a torn body". And then "Plagued is.." and "broken is..." It seems weird that it wasn't "caged is...". But that's all, good poem.