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11/23/2004 c1 8Childlike Innocence
Brilliant. The visuals given were powerful and poignant. Thank you.

Childlike Innocence
2/16/2004 c1 I Found Myself At 24
Great poem, as usual. Fave lines: "So what is fear, but my desire?" and the last bit.
2/15/2004 c1 90Identity
you have such a way with your writing. it flows so smoothly and and teh wording is absolutly wonderful. i look forward to reading more of your work.
1/29/2004 c1 2Sheila Ibre
Brilliant poem once again! Will be waiting to hear more...
1/28/2004 c1 22Tempest Drifter
Eloquent, especially with the word "Close". My favorite part:
"Here as I watch the winter's wake,
Slowly I feel the splinters break,
And watch as they circle in the dusty morn,
Suddenly I ache with cold so forlorn,"
It's beautiful how unrestrained you are in describing these things. It still inspires me. Keep writing, aode. It does a world of good.
1/26/2004 c1 WarriorHeart
This is probably the best piece of work with such a length that I have ever read. I can't get over how wonderful the flow was, and the words were brilliant.

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