for Dear Diary1/28/2004 c1 
189lyricalprose
Oh hon. *wow* and I say again *wow* I have no words to express, only rising and falling chest filling with sadness..
a beautifully written poem and youre only 13 eh? Some insights you have, :)
189lyricalproseOh hon. *wow* and I say again *wow* I have no words to express, only rising and falling chest filling with sadness..
a beautifully written poem and youre only 13 eh? Some insights you have, :)
1/27/2004 c1 118origamikitty
Actually, I didn't use a thesaurus or rhyming dictionary. Although, I had to use one on my "Am I Good Enough" poem. Thanks for all the reviews guys ^_^
118origamikittyActually, I didn't use a thesaurus or rhyming dictionary. Although, I had to use one on my "Am I Good Enough" poem. Thanks for all the reviews guys ^_^
1/27/2004 c1 9Jin C
Okay, seriously now, I have to stop reading your stuff for today or I'll comment on everything...But your work is very deservant of reviews. I take it you've never been through this, but you really give off a good picture of it happening and what the person is feeling; to me anyway. And I can't believe you were able to rhyme while still telling a good story. I bet you used a thersaurous...
9Jin COkay, seriously now, I have to stop reading your stuff for today or I'll comment on everything...But your work is very deservant of reviews. I take it you've never been through this, but you really give off a good picture of it happening and what the person is feeling; to me anyway. And I can't believe you were able to rhyme while still telling a good story. I bet you used a thersaurous...
1/26/2004 c1 34Vivian Strong
That has got to be the worst feeling in the world. Notonly becoming the person that a child hates, but that child being the younger you. Btw, i like the length, it gives it substance. and i like the flow of how things go through the poem. keep writing, take care!
~Vivi
34Vivian StrongThat has got to be the worst feeling in the world. Notonly becoming the person that a child hates, but that child being the younger you. Btw, i like the length, it gives it substance. and i like the flow of how things go through the poem. keep writing, take care!
~Vivi
1/26/2004 c1 45flowerthief
That's really amazing and sad at the end. Good job. One spelling error: hire instead of higher. Keep writing.
-
AC
45flowerthiefThat's really amazing and sad at the end. Good job. One spelling error: hire instead of higher. Keep writing.
-
AC