1/27/2004 c1 9Jin C
You're quickly becoming a great writer to me. This poem in particular shows emotion well, and I can sympazise with your words. Except for a part where I was actually good at something..I am curious for who that particular person was trying to live up to, but I guess that's better left unknown. Anyways, for someone just starting to write, you're awfully good. It'll be nice to see your work when you improve more^^
You're quickly becoming a great writer to me. This poem in particular shows emotion well, and I can sympazise with your words. Except for a part where I was actually good at something..I am curious for who that particular person was trying to live up to, but I guess that's better left unknown. Anyways, for someone just starting to write, you're awfully good. It'll be nice to see your work when you improve more^^
1/27/2004 c1 90SweetGrape
Aha- well said; keep asking the same question, looking for approval as you tell how you tried so hard and sacrificed.
But in the end "You don't matter. I do", "It should have never been for you"- well said and very true. Even if it appears to be realised too late- (you can always start afresh.)
Aha- well said; keep asking the same question, looking for approval as you tell how you tried so hard and sacrificed.
But in the end "You don't matter. I do", "It should have never been for you"- well said and very true. Even if it appears to be realised too late- (you can always start afresh.)