for Fear4/6/2004 c1 
1bugpunk
omg! that was really good! i read ur review for tiger7wwjd's poem about divorce, and i think u have a good pt...i never thought about it that way... loved this poem tho! :)
1bugpunkomg! that was really good! i read ur review for tiger7wwjd's poem about divorce, and i think u have a good pt...i never thought about it that way... loved this poem tho! :)
1/28/2004 c1 rae
you fixed it like i said! i like it so much more! very nicely done
you fixed it like i said! i like it so much more! very nicely done
1/26/2004 c1 54rainbowskye
I like this piece. The use of 'it' rather than assigning a gender is a good technique you've used here and I like the ABCB rhyme scheme.
54rainbowskyeI like this piece. The use of 'it' rather than assigning a gender is a good technique you've used here and I like the ABCB rhyme scheme.