for Lost Will4/16/2004 c1 
6Froggie0
only from this one short paragraph I can tell this will be a GREAT story. (also, the description greatly interests me...)
good work! keep writing and update this soon!
~Froggie0~
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6Froggie0only from this one short paragraph I can tell this will be a GREAT story. (also, the description greatly interests me...)
good work! keep writing and update this soon!
~Froggie0~
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1/31/2004 c1 17R. W. Rae
A very nice beginning. Great detail and word choice. Punctuation (i'm a comma natzi sorry) errors, but only minor ones. All in all..I'd just kinda' like to meet some of the characters! I'm really not one to talk, but don't just leave something that has a good begining just sitting there, do something with it! Good luck! Oh, and thank you a million times for reviewing "Fire from Below". I seriously about wet myself I was so excited, just becuase I got a review I'm going to work on actually getting the thrid chapter out. Anyways, keep up the good work!
17R. W. RaeA very nice beginning. Great detail and word choice. Punctuation (i'm a comma natzi sorry) errors, but only minor ones. All in all..I'd just kinda' like to meet some of the characters! I'm really not one to talk, but don't just leave something that has a good begining just sitting there, do something with it! Good luck! Oh, and thank you a million times for reviewing "Fire from Below". I seriously about wet myself I was so excited, just becuase I got a review I'm going to work on actually getting the thrid chapter out. Anyways, keep up the good work!
1/28/2004 c1 sakurafox666
Wow...that's a really good beggining(can't spell) and really great detail. eep! Write more please! /_^
Wow...that's a really good beggining(can't spell) and really great detail. eep! Write more please! /_^