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3/23/2004 c1 24Rose of Ebony
I think you should keep the last stanza. My favorie part is the last two in the second stanza. "In a world where lust and sex/ Run rampant as the new plague." That's just too true.
Ja ne!
~Ebony
1/27/2004 c1 24empress of the dark abyss
i think it is great. i think this is one of my fave poems of yours. good job.
1/26/2004 c1 Teea
this is pretty depressing..but i like how you wrote it. it all seems to flow.

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