for Requiem for a Dream2/3/2004 c1 
29Granite Claws
^_^ Defineitly your most awsome poem yet! (Come read some of my stories!*hint hint*)
29Granite Claws^_^ Defineitly your most awsome poem yet! (Come read some of my stories!*hint hint*)
1/26/2004 c1 Litsares
This is very good. Really. I mean it. I'm not just saying this to be nice; it really is a brilliant piece of work. The rhyming is good. The rhythm, too; the whole thing flows nicely. Oh, and the imagery is just beautiful. I really like some of the phrases you use, like "red-tinged blue of sky."
This is very good. Really. I mean it. I'm not just saying this to be nice; it really is a brilliant piece of work. The rhyming is good. The rhythm, too; the whole thing flows nicely. Oh, and the imagery is just beautiful. I really like some of the phrases you use, like "red-tinged blue of sky."