
2/21/2005 c1 M L
I've never understood the point of haikus. I guess I like them, but I don't go out and say 'hey, I feel like some haikus today' Anyways. I don't write them or read them, but I like the way you crushed so much into.. a haiku. good job.
I've never understood the point of haikus. I guess I like them, but I don't go out and say 'hey, I feel like some haikus today' Anyways. I don't write them or read them, but I like the way you crushed so much into.. a haiku. good job.
2/19/2004 c1
31amdespot
really good for a first haiku. haikus are hard, you have to get meaning and depth into 3 short lines and certain syllables. this was great, it really captured a great depth!

really good for a first haiku. haikus are hard, you have to get meaning and depth into 3 short lines and certain syllables. this was great, it really captured a great depth!
1/30/2004 c1 WhiteRequiem
I like this one. It has quite the powerful image, and the added ryhme I believe makes this all the more impacting.
"Heart and mind collide" is an excellent line.
-Grant19-
I like this one. It has quite the powerful image, and the added ryhme I believe makes this all the more impacting.
"Heart and mind collide" is an excellent line.
-Grant19-
1/27/2004 c1
81Ultimate Schuyler
Aw. This sound likes... a heartbreak poem? That's cute if it is. As an authoress, I love feedback too. ^_^ Please review my haikus too! ^_^

Aw. This sound likes... a heartbreak poem? That's cute if it is. As an authoress, I love feedback too. ^_^ Please review my haikus too! ^_^